In the more classy version of the situation in movies and TV, there’s a sullen moment then a cut to a tasteful sex scene with something like Iron & Wine or Death Cab for Cutie playing.
Another version would have the same first panel then cut to them in bed smoking after the sex.
Another version of Panel 2 is rated A for Adult. Anywho, it’s always fun to mess with someone’s Stories in this Manner, until you’re kicked from the Conversation anyways… Perhaps I should save it for last like Ginger did?
Shoulda used the other version, IMO.
O.O
I think the version you put in works best.